Saturday, March 27, 2010

Script Writers & Supervisors


From The Wall Street Journal March 25, 2010

In Movies, to Err Is Human, To Nitpick Is Even More So
A Committed Cadre of Carpers Catches Flubs in Flicks; Rikki Rosen’s Watching
By BARRY NEWMAN

ST. LOUIS—Johnny Depp’s fingernails are dirty when he gets drunk on rum and passes out in the movie “Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl.” When he wakes up and brings his hands to his face, the fingernails are clean.

Rikki Rosen caught that. She reported it to a Web site in Britain called Movie Mistakes, which does nothing but list mistakes in movies. While Mr. Depp inspects his pirate crew, the sun shines from different directions between cuts. Ms. Rosen also caught that mistake. When Mr. Depp bites into an apple, the bite mark changes shape from shot to shot. Ms. Rosen caught that one, too.

In all, she has reported 293 mistakes in the pirate movie to Movie Mistakes. She has also reported 3,695 mistakes in 181 other movies—including the bit in “War of the Worlds” when Tom Cruise yells “We’re under attack!” and it’s obvious that the inspection sticker previously on his van’s windshield is no longer there.

Ms. Rosen is a 48-year-old with red hair and a bad cold. Her inner-suburban living room contains couches and cat baskets; an old Sony television with an Xbox under it; tea cups, a computer and stacks of DVDs. At last count, she was Movie Mistake’s No. 2contributor, behind someone called “Hamster” with 4,413.

“Sure, a movie can have mistakes,” she said, curled up on her couch one morning. “People are imperfect. But sometimes it’s just one after the other after the other. It smacks of not caring. These things should not be blatant on the screen.” Ms. Rosen suppressed a cough. “So I look,” she said. “I look at everything.”

All movie sets have nitpickers. They were “script girls,” early on. Now they’re “script supervisors.”

They ward off wobbles that make movies less believable. But the Internet has stirred up a nest of similarly obsessed volunteers. They nitpick the nitpickers.

Jon Sandys, 31, founder of Movie Mistakes, posted a few gems on the Web in 1996 and asked people to send more. Now he lists 85,000, among them the Cessna in “Terminator 3” marked “N3035C” on the ground and “N3973F” in the air.

At IMDb, his huge rival, “goofs” rank in the top pages viewed by 57 million monthly visitors. “It’s smart people making connections,” says Keith Simanton, the site’s editor.

Clicking the names of script supervisors leads to lists of every mistake reported for every movie they’ve ever worked on. “They think they see things nobody else sees—it makes them feel clever,” says Sharon Watt, 32, a script supervisor in New York. “I can explain every one of my mistakes.”

Like this one: In “Precious,” a 2010 Oscar winner, Gabourey Sidibe steals some fried chicken and runs from a restaurant leaving her notebook behind. In the next scene, she has a notebook again.

In the script, someone gives her a new notebook. The moment was filmed exactly in keeping with the script. “We shot it,” says Ms. Watt. But disharmony arose in the production. Ms. Watt left. Three script supervisors succeeded her. In the final cut, the moment when Precious gets a new notebook is gone.

“The one person you don’t want to change on a shoot is the script supervisor,” Ms. Watt says. “A movie is like a jigsaw puzzle, and you’re the only one who has the cover of the box.”

Script supervisors keep thick logs of props, locations and costumes. Scenes aren’t shot in order. A bruise might have to look old in the morning and fresh in the afternoon. Actors ought to sync the same words with the same actions in each take. The idea is to give an editor film that can be spliced into a coherent whole.

Yet when a collar button is missing in an actor’s finest performance, an editor will usually forget the button and go for the performance.

“We’re not assuming that people who watch DVDs will keep going back and forth and back and forth and back and forth,” says Michael Taylor, a New York script supervisor turned editor.

Mr. Taylor hasn’t met Rikki Rosen—who was in her living room, feeding “Jaws” into her Xbox. The credits fade to a close up of a boy at a beach party. Behind him is a guy in a long-sleeve shirt. In the next shot, the sleeves are short.

Ms. Rosen hit the pause button and said, “See!”

“Jaws” was scarily flawless when she saw it as a teenager in Brooklyn. “I didn’t go swimming all summer,” Ms. Rosen says. Eleven years ago, she moved to St. Louis, where her husband is a salesman and she illustrates school materials. Her three growing sons watched a “Jaws” DVD over and over, and so did she.

The more she watched, the more mistakes jumped out—156 to be exact—and the worst of them are those yellow barrels the shark yanks off Quint’s boat in the final petrifying sequence:

“Look—two barrels on deck,” Ms. Rosen said, stopping the action and starting it again. “But here—three. Now two on the boat, three in water. Three on the boat, two in the water.”

The more mistakes she saw, the less scary “Jaws” became. Ms. Rosen calls that realization “cathartic.” When she isn’t watching horror movies, Ms. Rosen tries to keep her disbelief suspended. But sloppy moviemakers, in her opinion, won’t let her.

“Certain people have to do a better job,” she said, sipping tea. “One of my sons said to me, ‘Ma, you should be one of these people. You have this eye.’ ”

To prove it, she teed up “Some Like It Hot,” the all-time-great comedy with 51 IMDb goofs. Ms. Rosen had seen it once, years ago.

Instantly, she caught the broken (then unbroken) hearse window and the oddly leaky coffin. She got the rearranged beach chairs, and Marilyn Monroe’s disappearing bra strap.

But when the girls in the band run across the sand for a swim, Ms. Rosen missed the mountainous backdrop, which reveals that the movie was shot in California, not Florida. “I wasn’t looking,” she said, letting out a laugh. “I got carried away with the story.”

Well, nobody’s perfect.

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Where The Wild Things Are



If quirky was a style of writing, I'd love to be a master of it. Some of my stories, such as "The Glow," can be described as such. In others ("Tuna Sandwiches") a main character (Pepper) provides the quirkiness. I've never read the book, but I plan on doing so now. Memorable quote from the movie: "You're the first king we haven't eaten."
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Story and pictures by Maurice Sendak

The night Max wore his wolf suit and made mischief of one kind
and another
his mother called him "WILD THING!"
and Max said "I'LL EAR YOU UP!"
so he went to bed without eating anything.
That very night in Max's room a forest grew
and grew—
and grew until his ceiling hung with vines
and the walls became the world all around
and an ocean tumbled by with a private boat for Max
and he sailed off through night and day
and in and out of weeks
and almost over a year
to where the wild things are.
And when he came to the place where the wild things are
they roared their terrible roars and gnashed their terrible teeth
and rolled their terrible eyes and show their terrible claws
till Max said "BE STILL!"
and tamed them with the magic trick
of staring into their yellow eyes without blinking once
and they were frightened and called him the most wild thing of all
and made him king of all wild things.
"And now," cried Max, "let the wild rumpus start!"

"Now stop!" Max said and sent the wild things off to bed
without their supper. And Max the king of all wild things was lonely
and wanted to be where someone loved him best of all.
Then all around from far away across the world
he smelled good things to eat
so he gave up being king of where the wild things are.
But the wild things cried, "Oh please don't go—
we'll eat you up—we love you so!"
And Max said, "No!"
The wild things roared their terrible roars and gnashed their terrible teeth
and rolled their terrible eyes and showed their terrible claws
but Max stepped into his private boat and waved good-bye
and sailed back over a year
and in and out of weeks
and through a day
and into the night of his very own room
where he found his supper waiting for him
and it was still hot.
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How long did it take you to read the above? 45 seconds?
111-page screenplay by Spike Jonze and Dave Eggers
DVD is approximately 101 minutes

Thursday, March 11, 2010

Affect vs Effect



No, I can never remember either, so I stole this info from someone else's post on the Internet:

Affect
In order to understand the correct situation in which to use the word affect or effect, the first thing one must do is have a clear understanding of what each word means. According to yourDictionary.com, the word Affect means:

1. To have an influence on or effect a change in: Inflation affects the buying power of the dollar.
2.To act on the emotions of; touch or move.
3.To attack or infect, as a disease: Rheumatic fever can affect the heart.

Effect
The word effect has a different meaning. Here is the meaning according to yourDictionary.com:

1.Something brought about by a cause or agent; a result.
2.The power to produce an outcome or achieve a result; influence: The drug had an immediate effect on the pain. The government's action had no effect on the trade imbalance.
3.A scientific law, hypothesis, or phenomenon: the photovoltaic effect.
4.Advantage; avail: used her words to great effect in influencing the jury.
5.The condition of being in full force or execution: a new regulation that goes into effect tomorrow.
6.Something that produces a specific impression or supports a general design or intention: The lighting effects emphasized the harsh atmosphere of the drama.
7.A particular impression: large windows that gave an effect of spaciousness.
8.Production of a desired impression: spent lavishly on dinner just for effect.
9.The basic or general meaning; import: He said he was greatly worried, or words to that effect.

Grammar Rules for Affect and Effect
Now that we have the two definitions, how do we know which word to use? Here are a few suggestions to keep in mind:

1. If you are talking about a result, then use the word "effect."
•Example: What effect did the loss have on the team?

2. It is appropriate to use the word "effect" if one of these words is used immediately before the word: into, no, take, the, any, an, or and.
•Example: The prescribed medication had no effect on the patient's symptoms.
•Example: In analyzing a situation, it is important to take the concepts of cause and effect into consideration.

3. If you want to describe something that was caused or brought about, the right word to use is effect.
•Example: The new manager effected some positive changes in the office. (This means that the new manager caused some positive changes to take place in the office.)

4. Affect can be used as a noun to describe facial expression.
•Example: The young man with schizophrenia had a flat affect.
•Example: The woman took the news of her husband's sudden death with little affect.

5. Affect can also be used as a verb. Use it when trying to describe influencing someone or something rather than causing it.
•Example: How does the crime rate affect hiring levels by local police forces?
•Example: The weather conditions will affect the number of people who come to the county fair this year.

OK, OK, OK. Try this:
RAVEN
RememberAffectVerbEffectNoun

Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Hostel Behavior


Parle vous Francais? Sorry to hear about that.